Part 2: The Past Returns

For a moment, I thought that you were copying Santayana. That's cool but did you have to write fucking in the summary?

Do you have a fucking problem with some damn cursing?

Spurious use of words such as fuck and cunt are indicative of a sad lack in imagination. Why for instance a slathering of the word Vagina in a passage can bring much jocularity to an otherwise filler passage. Also creative cursing can be fun. IE: You fornicating ilegitamate son of a female dog who once had sex with her brother. Or if you wish to become risque in the supreme and express that emotional forcefulness that often accompanies a prolonged curse you could try the run on word like so: YougoddamnsonofabitchshutyourfuckingpieholebeforeIfillitwithmycock! (Said with all one breath no pause) Note how the offensive words are coverby the inoffensive words.

Other than your propenstiy for swearing all the time it is good :P


ROFLMAO

What the shit are you talking about?

Simply poking fun at the comment made by chocoholic and your response to it. You seemed a bit defensive about it and chocoholic seemed a bit offended by it and I found it funny. So funny in fact that I wrote a little mock review on swearing/cursing.

Haha. Alrighty then.

I wasn't even defensive about it, actually. But this is Robert's story and dammit, he swears. A lot. He is an old (space) Navy guy.

That is what was funny iof you read the story you don't have to even wonder about the cussing LOL