Dreamer, drama

By univited, do you mean uninvited? If not, then never mind. That poem was strange, in a good way.

Again, I'm just floating around, picking out pieces and commenting.

This is extremely short, and doesn't really go anywhere.  There is also a perspective change here, which doesn't really work.

Perhaps you could rewrite this.  I don't understand how chocoholic8 above has deemed this worthy of a four-star vote, but each to their own.

this was short and to me seems like there should be more to the story.
it seems like there are two people in the poem
you could develop the two of them and how they relate to one another in a few more stanzas.
like i said before, i like your style, i just wish i could see more of it!!

~samantha