This is just a shot story I penned in under an hour when I was in the festive mood. Fo once but it has a theme, no matter how dark and depraved. I'll be intrested see how it is received. Anyway, Merry Xmas. :)
http://www.bookzek.com/node/1968
A Twisted Christmas Tale
Sat, 12/12/2009 - 18:28
A Twisted Christmas Tale
Mon, 01/18/2010 - 22:49
#1
I got ya dean
dont worry
Mon, 02/01/2010 - 11:18
#2
Thanks. Do you think the
Thanks. Do you think the story is perhaps too much. Have a crossed the line?!
Mon, 02/01/2010 - 15:48
#3
Speaking only for myself, I
Speaking only for myself, I found this story highly disturbing. It actually haunted me for days, and I would have to push it out of my mind and make myself think of something else. I don't know if that means you crossed a line, or if that means its really well done - you decide. It really bothered me though, I admit...it was all I could do not to put my 11 year old son into Alvin's role...
Mon, 02/01/2010 - 21:09
#4
thanks for your kind words.
thanks for your kind words. It is a horrific story. In my mind, a horror story is meant to unsettle and if indeed you were affected I believe I have got what I want. As to crossing the line, I have no idea. Personally I think it is toeing the line but there is no graphic details of Alin. All mind work mostly.
Tue, 02/02/2010 - 15:05
#5
I thought it was hilarious.
I thought it was hilarious. But don't be dejected by that, I tend to laugh my way through most so-called "horror" films.
Sun, 02/07/2010 - 01:47
#6
No I dont think you crossed any lines,
And you shouldn't be afriad of such a thing in the first place. To inhibit your creativity is a very silly thing to do.
